Looks like you used the dodge tool on one side of the eye, but not the other. It could just be the lighting though. Generally I think this is just rather nice though, the reflection (edited or not?) comes through very clear. It's a nice effect - the color in the eye also looks editted artistically . . . I think that's my favorite part - the eye color. The camera's definition must be really nice, it was cool looking at the neat little variations in the skin texture around the eye.
You can even see all the neat little veins
If I gave photos scores, this one would get a high score . . . but I don't so oh well. It's well worth the viewing though. Thanks for sharing it.